Editing

Polishing Your Fiction: How to Strengthen Your Plot for Maximum Impact

As a writer, you may have a cast of characters who feel authentic and real, but without a strong plot to back them up, their story can fall flat. Just like a house needs a solid foundation, your narrative needs a sturdy plot to keep your readers hooked from beginning to end. Here are some tips to strengthen your plot and elevate your story to the next level.

1. Understand the Core Conflict

At the heart of every engaging story is a central conflict. Whether it’s a struggle between good and evil, internal doubt, or a complicated relationship, this conflict drives the story forward. Make sure your main characters have something to fight for or against, and don’t be afraid to raise the stakes. Readers need a reason to root for your characters, and conflict gives them that reason.

2. Check for Plot Holes

A plot hole is any inconsistency or gap in your story that makes the reader question its believability. As you revise, carefully examine your storyline to ensure that every event makes sense within the world you’ve created. Are there any unexplained events? Does everything tie together logically? A good editor can help you spot these gaps and offer suggestions to patch them up seamlessly.

3. Pacing Matters

A well-paced plot keeps readers engaged without overwhelming them with too much action or bogging them down with too much description. Ensure that your story has a natural ebb and flow. Scenes of action or tension should be followed by moments of reflection or calm to give readers a breather. Keep an eye on sections that feel too slow—tightening those can improve your narrative’s rhythm.

4. Character Motivation Drives Plot

Your characters shouldn’t just react to the plot; their desires, fears, and goals should drive it. If your protagonist wants to achieve something, the obstacles they face will shape the plot. Ask yourself, “What do my characters want?” and “What’s stopping them from getting it?” The answers will help you fine-tune the events and twists in your story.

5. Subplots Should Support the Main Story

While subplots can add depth to your story, they should never overshadow or derail the main plot. If you have side stories that don’t enhance the central conflict or character development, consider cutting them. However, well-placed subplots can add layers to your narrative, making it richer and more complex.

6. Surprises and Twists

Predictability can kill a reader’s interest, so keep them on their toes by incorporating unexpected twists. However, make sure that these surprises are earned. A twist should feel shocking but inevitable in hindsight, not random. When done right, these moments can leave a lasting impact and make your plot memorable.

7. The Resolution Should Feel Satisfying

Once you’ve built up the tension throughout your story, it’s important to deliver a resolution that feels satisfying. That doesn’t always mean a happy ending, but it should feel fitting for the characters and the journey they’ve been on. Loose ends can frustrate readers, so make sure everything is wrapped up—or at least addressed—by the conclusion.

Final Thoughts

Creating a strong plot takes time and careful consideration, but with these tips in mind, you can shape a story that grips readers from start to finish. Remember, a solid plot enhances the depth of your characters and keeps the narrative on track. And, of course, having a skilled editor to review your work can help identify the elements that will truly make your story shine.

If you’re working on a manuscript and want feedback on how to strengthen your plot or characters, feel free to reach out to me for professional copyediting services. Together, we can bring your story to life in the most compelling way possible!

Cheers!

Book Reviews, General Bookish

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The first 11 episodes of my story are up for viewing with more on the way if anyone is interested!

As a friendly reminder, it’s a college, sports romance between a football player playboy and the true crime loving athletic training student. They both sign up for the schools dating app turned tv show, only to match despite it being forbidden by the school for them to be together.

It’s spicy. It’s a little angsty. It’s giggle inducing.

You can try it out here!

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On Wednesdays We Read Pink

It’s been a hot minute hasn’t it? It’s Wednesday, so I’m sharing a quick stack of pink books. I’ve read three out of five of these, which I feel like is actually not bad considering my TBR is endless.

California Holiday – Kate Cann
I actually read this book for the first time way back in high school. God bless, the fact that I can say ‘way back in high school’ makes me feel ancient. A UK girl has just finished school and is taking a quick gap year. She sets out to be a live in nanny in the States, but things end up being a bit different than she planned.

I loved this book in high school, but it didn’t quite hit the same as a 27 year old when I read it again last year.

Tropes: Foreign holiday, nanny, fleeing from boss

The Dare – Elle Kennedy
I finished this book last week actually and loved every minute of it. Conor and Taylor were perfect. The sorority aspect, while it had some issues, made me think of my own experiences sometimes. Fake dating also gets me every time. I know where it’s going to end up, but gah, it still makes me so happy when they start actually falling for each other.

Conor was freakin adorable in all of his attempts to woo T. Taylor’s mom was interesting, and I 100% did not see her boyfriend coming at all. Sports romances in the fall hit different. It doesn’t even matter what the sport is….(Football is still my fave). I can’t wait to read the rest of Briar U since I read this one, book 4, first.

Tropes: Fake dating, he falls first, sports romance, hockey romance, friends to lovers (kinda), slow burn

Once Upon a Broken Heart – Stephanie Garber
We have reached the first of this stack that I haven’t read yet, which is comical because I actually own two copies of this book and have the second book on order. Whoops!

I have been reluctant to read this one because I wasn’t a fan of Caraval. Well, it wasn’t so much that I wasn’t a fan of it, but the whole thing felt like a fever dream that wasn’t really fleshed out. I just couldn’t really get into it, and that’s fine! I know there’s plenty of people that loved Caraval. However, because of this, I just haven’t wanted to jump on the OUABH train.

The Duke and I – Julia Quinn
We all know the storyline for this one from the Netflix show Bridgerton. That is absolutely the reason I picked up this series. I bought these special editions before I’d even read the books. I loved Daphne and Simon’s story, a lot of it was raw and emotional, but they also had such a cute courtship.

The Bridgerton world is one of my favorite historical romance worlds. It doesn’t quite live up to my love of WWII romances, but it’s almost there.

Tropes: Fake dating, reluctant MMC, historical romance, forced marriage,

Romancing Mr Bridgerton – Julia Quinn
The last book in our stack and the second of the books I’ve not read yet. I’m looking forward to this one, and I ought to read it before the next season comes out. I feel like this one will be a cozy winter read for some reason.

What about you? What are your favorite pink books on your selves?