Editing

Polishing Your Fiction: How to Strengthen Your Plot for Maximum Impact

As a writer, you may have a cast of characters who feel authentic and real, but without a strong plot to back them up, their story can fall flat. Just like a house needs a solid foundation, your narrative needs a sturdy plot to keep your readers hooked from beginning to end. Here are some tips to strengthen your plot and elevate your story to the next level.

1. Understand the Core Conflict

At the heart of every engaging story is a central conflict. Whether it’s a struggle between good and evil, internal doubt, or a complicated relationship, this conflict drives the story forward. Make sure your main characters have something to fight for or against, and don’t be afraid to raise the stakes. Readers need a reason to root for your characters, and conflict gives them that reason.

2. Check for Plot Holes

A plot hole is any inconsistency or gap in your story that makes the reader question its believability. As you revise, carefully examine your storyline to ensure that every event makes sense within the world you’ve created. Are there any unexplained events? Does everything tie together logically? A good editor can help you spot these gaps and offer suggestions to patch them up seamlessly.

3. Pacing Matters

A well-paced plot keeps readers engaged without overwhelming them with too much action or bogging them down with too much description. Ensure that your story has a natural ebb and flow. Scenes of action or tension should be followed by moments of reflection or calm to give readers a breather. Keep an eye on sections that feel too slow—tightening those can improve your narrative’s rhythm.

4. Character Motivation Drives Plot

Your characters shouldn’t just react to the plot; their desires, fears, and goals should drive it. If your protagonist wants to achieve something, the obstacles they face will shape the plot. Ask yourself, “What do my characters want?” and “What’s stopping them from getting it?” The answers will help you fine-tune the events and twists in your story.

5. Subplots Should Support the Main Story

While subplots can add depth to your story, they should never overshadow or derail the main plot. If you have side stories that don’t enhance the central conflict or character development, consider cutting them. However, well-placed subplots can add layers to your narrative, making it richer and more complex.

6. Surprises and Twists

Predictability can kill a reader’s interest, so keep them on their toes by incorporating unexpected twists. However, make sure that these surprises are earned. A twist should feel shocking but inevitable in hindsight, not random. When done right, these moments can leave a lasting impact and make your plot memorable.

7. The Resolution Should Feel Satisfying

Once you’ve built up the tension throughout your story, it’s important to deliver a resolution that feels satisfying. That doesn’t always mean a happy ending, but it should feel fitting for the characters and the journey they’ve been on. Loose ends can frustrate readers, so make sure everything is wrapped up—or at least addressed—by the conclusion.

Final Thoughts

Creating a strong plot takes time and careful consideration, but with these tips in mind, you can shape a story that grips readers from start to finish. Remember, a solid plot enhances the depth of your characters and keeps the narrative on track. And, of course, having a skilled editor to review your work can help identify the elements that will truly make your story shine.

If you’re working on a manuscript and want feedback on how to strengthen your plot or characters, feel free to reach out to me for professional copyediting services. Together, we can bring your story to life in the most compelling way possible!

Cheers!

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Blind Dating Adventure: Lucy and Knox Series

New chapters of Lucy and Knox’s wild, blind dating adventure are up! The first 10 chapters are always free to read!

Ever been signed up for a dating app that is actually a TV show for your college by your best friend, only to find out that it’s actually a bunch of literal blind dates where you can’t see your partner? No? Just me? I’m in my senior year of my athletic training program, doing my level-best to avoid any compromising positions with any athletes, but the world is bound and determined to push me toward the man I told my heart drop three years ago. Can I manage to protect my heart and graduate?

Tropes found:
– football romance
– Athletic trainer FMC
– Blind dating
– Sexy texting banter
– Riot of a best friend

You can find it here! Popping over and giving it a follow help small authors like me and is always appreciated!

Cheers!

Book Reviews, General Bookish

Kindle Vella

The first 11 episodes of my story are up for viewing with more on the way if anyone is interested!

As a friendly reminder, it’s a college, sports romance between a football player playboy and the true crime loving athletic training student. They both sign up for the schools dating app turned tv show, only to match despite it being forbidden by the school for them to be together.

It’s spicy. It’s a little angsty. It’s giggle inducing.

You can try it out here!

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I did something today

So I did something huge today. I published an episode on Kindle Vella. It’s my first time publishing something I’ve written in the fiction realm. While I don’t think anyone will actually read it because I’m anxious about marketing it and it being me as the author and people knowing that, I am proud of myself for finally doing it.

Shoot, maybe I’ll finally finish the thing too!

However, if anyone is interested, you can find it for free here!

Here’s our cover for it!

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My Favorite Reading Accessories

We’re book babes, we love getting cozy and reading, especially when we have things to make that experience better. So…I’ve compiled a list of my favorite accessories to go with reading.

Amazon Kindle (I mean, duh.)

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Personally, I prefer the Oasis, but I think they must be doing a sneaky update behind the scenes at Amazon, since it’s currently unavailable. My second choice, though, is the Kindle Scribe, but it is fairly pricey. However, my favorite thing about it is that you can write and annotate your books. It also has a notebook option, which as someone with ADHD, being able to take notes on the Scribe rather than my iPad keeps me from going down a rabbit hole on the internet.

The best bang for your buck Kindle is just the plain old kindle, but the Kindle Paperwhite is the most popular from what I’ve seen on Bookstagram. I get it, I’m a lover of physical books too. I like having my shelf trophies, but it’s so nice to just toss my Oasis into my purse or diaper bag and go. Plus, there’s literally hundreds of thousands, if not more, books at your fingertips––just a click away. Speaking of clicks, that leads me to my next fave.

A Page Turner

The page turner lets you prop your kindle up, or use one of my other favorite accessories, and tuck your hands away under the blanket or grab onto your cup of tea or glass of wine and just tap a button on a remote to turn the page.

Lefties unite, no more stretching your thumb to hit just the right spot on your kindle screen to flip forward, No more aching thumb after a long reading session.

Kindle Holder

This one you have options. For me, I don’t have a bedside table, so the ones with a clamp don’t work for me, I have to use a kindle stand that has a foot to set on the ground or tuck between the mattress and the bed frame. Like this one!

Is it bougie? Sure! But how nice is it to not have to hold your arm up for ages when you’re reading or having to find the perfect pillow and position to prop your arm up?

A Blanket–specifically an electric blanket

I am a big fan of being warm and cozy. Despite it creeping closer toward summer, I am still using my electric blanket in the evenings while I read. This one from Amazon has six settings and is the perfect size to curl up with in my chair at night. It heats up so quickly and stays on for quite a long time. Bonus, it comes in nine colors!

A Coffee Mug

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Is this one necessary? No, but well…are any of these actually necessary? I mean, to make things a little easier and more luxurious, yes. I love my heated coffee cup. This one is useful outside of reading too. I have a toddler that I’m always chasing around and next thing you know that coffee I made two hours ago has been forgotten. My heated coffee cup keeps it nice and toasty.

Bringing it back to reading, I love when my tea is still warm after I’ve finished that super intense chapter that makes me forget that I’m even in the real world.

That’s it for now! Hope you guys have a stellar day!