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Book Reviews

Intense Nordic Tale: Freya’s Transformation and Bjorn’s Love | Review

Cayla

Rating: ★★★★★
Spice: 🌶️🌶️

This one deserves all the stars. I adored every minute of this. For some reason, Vikings are one of my favorites to read about. The ferocity of everything they do makes things so much more intense. Be that their love, their fighting, literally just their existing.

Freya is one part badass, one part impulsive, another part loyal, and yet still one more part endearing. Bjorn is one spicy, fiery, sweet, and caring Viking that has raided my shores for my heart. Okay, that was cheesy. But still, he’s a top notch book boyfriend.

It is hard to keep one’s wits when faced with a woman as beautiful as the sight of shore to a man who has been lost at sea.

Bjorn is hilariously poetic even when he does not mean to be, but the above quote is by fat one of the sweetest things I think he tells Freya.

I love the growth that Freya goes through in this, and it’s been awhile since I read a book that didn’t have a POV in the male lead’s eyes. However, it was actually refreshing to not immediately have answers to what was happening in Bjorn’s head. Danielle really takes us on a journey through this and not just across the map of Skaland. We see Freya go from beaten and downtrodden to finding her voice to questioning her voice to really leaning into the emotions she feels.

I will be anxiously waiting for the next installment of the Saga of the Unfated because I feel as though I’ve been left in an icy fjord waiting for a drakkar to come pick me up.

Have you read this one yet? How did you feel about Freya, Snorri, Bjorn, and Ylva? If you haven’t read this one yet, have you read any other Nordic/Viking books?

Cheers and happy reading!

Editing

First impressions matter

Cayla

The Power of First Impressions: Why Fiction Copy Editing is Essential

When it comes to writing fiction, the old saying “You never get a second chance to make a first impression” couldn’t be truer. In the world of storytelling, that first impression can make or break your reader’s experience, and that’s where the magic of fiction copy editing comes into play.

Imagine your manuscript as a meticulously crafted gem. The story you’ve poured your heart and soul into deserves to shine in its purest form. But even the most dazzling gems need a skilled jeweler to cut, polish, and bring out their brilliance. This is precisely what fiction copy editing does for your manuscript—it’s the polishing touch that ensures your story sparkles with precision and clarity.

Why First Impressions Matter

In fiction, the first few pages are crucial. They’re your chance to hook the reader, draw them into your world, and make them fall in love with your characters and plot. A gripping opening can set the tone for the entire story, while a lackluster start might prompt readers to move on to the next book.

First impressions extend beyond just the initial pages. They also encompass how your characters are introduced, how the dialogue flows, and how the plot unfolds. All these elements need to be fine-tuned to engage your audience right from the get-go.

The Role of Fiction Copy Editing

Fiction copy editing is more than just a spelling and grammar check. It’s about enhancing the rhythm of your narrative, ensuring consistency in your plot and characters, and refining the dialogue to make it punchy and authentic. Good editors will:

  1. Polish Your Prose: They’ll help eliminate awkward phrasing and ensure your writing flows smoothly, making it easier for readers to get lost in your story.
  2. Sharpen Your Characters: Editors will work to ensure your characters are well-developed and consistent, helping them to leap off the page and into your readers’ imaginations.
  3. Tighten Your Plot: They’ll identify any plot holes or pacing issues, making sure your story progresses in a way that keeps readers eagerly turning the pages.
  4. Enhance Dialogue: Dialogue should sound natural and serve a purpose. Editors will help refine your characters’ conversations, making them realistic and impactful.

The Editing Process as a Partnership

Think of fiction copy editing as a partnership between you and your editor. It’s about working together to make your story the best it can be. Editors offer fresh perspectives and constructive feedback, helping you see your manuscript from a reader’s point of view.

Ultimately, the goal is to create a polished final product that makes a lasting impression. By investing in fiction copy editing, you’re not just refining your manuscript—you’re enhancing the overall reader experience, ensuring that your story resonates long after the last page is turned.

So, if you’re ready to give your manuscript the polished finish it deserves and make a memorable first impression, consider partnering with a skilled fiction editor. Your story—and your readers—will thank you for it.

General Bookish

I did something today

Cayla

So I did something huge today. I published an episode on Kindle Vella. It’s my first time publishing something I’ve written in the fiction realm. While I don’t think anyone will actually read it because I’m anxious about marketing it and it being me as the author and people knowing that, I am proud of myself for finally doing it.

Shoot, maybe I’ll finally finish the thing too!

However, if anyone is interested, you can find it for free here!

Here’s our cover for it!

Editing, General Bookish

You can’t edit a blank page…

Cayla

I’ve been staring at a blank page for far too long trying to think of something to talk about today when I realized that I actually made a post on my Instagram about that this week.

Ironic, no?

My post feels a little on the nose after having sat here for who knows how long. I can’t even edit a blog post if there’s nothing there.

I think that’s something all of us creators need a reminder of every now and then. Your first draft doesn’t have to be perfect. It doesn’t even have to make sense. Just get the words out on the page. Get the ideas going because sometimes, once you get going, the words just keep going.

For me at least, staring at a blank page will breed self doubt and apathy toward my project, but once I get going, I find myself on a roll. Do I go back and edit out a good bit of what I’ve written or rewrite things and add others? Of course, but you can’t edit what isn’t there!

Just dump the words out

Throwing it back to middle school here. Do a mind dump. Just let the stream of consciousness take over the page. Don’t let anything tell you that it doesn’t belong on the page. Put it on there and go back later to make cuts and changes.

Set a timer

I find quick sprints to be really effective. When you’re dumping out the words or just trying to work on an idea, set a timer anywhere from 10 minutes to 30 minutes and just work. Put your phone on do not disturb, ignore that email notification that just came in, just let your brain focus on one task. Get your coffee or your snack before you set the timer so you’re not tempted to make a trip to the kitchen mid sprint.

Doodle

Okay hear me out, do you ever let your mind wander while you’re on the phone and somehow you have this great idea but then you don’t remember it? Start doodling so your brain is focused on that, but once your brain wanders and the idea strikes, open the word doc and work! Or just start making notes on your doodle paper!

What do you typically do when you’re staring at a blank page?

Cayla

Editing

Why it’s important to hire out for editing

Cayla

It can be so easy to say editing is a luxury or proofreading doesn’t really matter, especially when your project isn’t some massive thing like a 200,000 word manuscript. However—I’m about to age myself here—let’s throw it back to that meme that went around Facebook. Actually, let me just drop one below.

Our brains a literally wired to fix mistakes, and we don’t even realize we’ve done it. We skip over double words, glance over typos, and rearrange sentences that are out of whack. This is especially true in our own writing because we know what we were intending to say. Due to this, it’s almost as if we’re blind to mistakes.

In addition to this, have you ever stared at a word long enough it doesn’t even look like a real word anymore. I’ll throw it back to when I had to write a word one hundred times if I misspelled it in school—wait y’all didn’t have to do that?

It may not be your forte.

And that’s okay! The nuances of the English language are complicated at best and nonsensical at worst. Your forte is your niche, so why try to shove a square peg in a round hole? You should be focused on your work, your creativity, your website, or whatever your project is rather than trying to force yourself to do a task that isn’t what you enjoy or feel perfect doing

Having a fresh set of eyes can pick up more mistakes.

Someone who has had no interaction with that particular project can pick up typos, mistakes, forgotten commas easier than someone who has been married to the project for weeks, months, or years. You glance over the to that should be too. Maybe a pesky comma sneaks through unnoticed or an em dash has an extra space or no space. It’s kind of like walking into a house you’re going to buy. The people who are selling the house didn’t notice that their photo wall is off center, but you, seeing the house for the time, notice it right off the bat. It’s like a neon sign. An editor or proofreader is like that home buyer, seeing those neon signs that are easy to miss when you’re the one living in the home.

Time! Time is such a limited resource.

As a writer, project coordinator, business owner, you have so much on your plate. Your time is stretched thin across all the things you have to do. You feel like you have to let things go just to make sure you meet deadlines or accomplish the other tasks on your list. There aren’t enough hours in the day.

I get it! It’s easy to become married to your project and feel like you can do it all, but why not share the burden? Commas, em dashes, typos, and structure are editors’ jam. Let us handle that while you do your thing.

Feel free to send me a message about your project and let’s chat!

Cayla

ARC Reviews, Book Reviews

Book Review: Just This Once – Lena Hendrix

Cayla

I love all of Lena’s main male characters. Whip King was no different. I had the distinct pleasure of being sent this book as an ARC, and let me tell you, I was so thrilled to get my grubby paws on it.

I have been dying for the King’s side of the feud and more of their back story. This initial dive into their nuances left me wanting so much more. I cannot wait for this series to continue. As always with interconnected series and standalones, we get glimpses of other characters we’ve met before. Seeing Whip’s relationship with Lee in the fire house and the secret soft spot they all seem to have for Duke.

Back to Just This Once.

Hendrix gives us a spicy, sweet, cocktail with a piercing bite to it. Yes. Piercing is emphasized right there. One of my favorite things about Lena and her writing is her ability to give me just enough spice without compromising her incredible plots. Plus, she writes a killer feud that I’ve been hooked on finding more about for what six books now?

If you haven’t picked this one up yet, it’s available on KU—Here!

Happy reading, bookworms!

Editing

Welcome Back!

Cayla

It’s been awhile…

Staind

Did you sing that in your head too? If you did, you are my people. I’ve been active on my bookstagram, but sometimes life has a way of speeding up and getting in the way of things, you know? Since the last time I posted on here, I’ve had a son, left my job with the college I worked with, launched my freelance editing business, signed on with an indie publisher as a copy editor, and moved to a new state!

Exhausted reading that? Hey, me too. I’ve thoroughly enjoyed the last couple years. I’m so excited to start offering more editing services, especially to the indie author community. That is my main love. There are many stories ready to be told, and I’m just here to help those stories along.

Reading, writing, annotating, and editing have been my passion for so long, and I just want to say I’m grateful that I have this opportunity to make those loves my job.

Until next time, bookworms!

Cayla

Book Reviews

Review: The Bridge Kingdom

Cayla

Rating: 🌟🌟🌟/5

Overall Feelings: I liked this book, but it wasn’t one I’d add to my pile of I would read over and over again. I will definitely read it again, but it isn’t going to be one that I automatically reach for. I also think some of this is because I’m not a fan of third person point of view.

Lara: So, Lara is an interesting character. She spends fifteen years of her life locked in a palace in the desert learning to be ruthless, a killer, a spy, and the perfect wife to bring Ithicana to its knees. She ‘poisons’ her sisters to grant her the ability to see her father’s plan through. Her father is atrocious, and I feel that she gave him a little bit too much trust and grace after everything that he did. I feel like after fifteen years of training to be an assassin and a spy, she should have done a little bit better of a job. At times, she seemed a little naive, immature, and out of character for what she is written to be.

Aren: I actually liked Aren. He seems like a good guy that cares about his people. His relationship with Jor is fun, and I like the interactions between him and the various soldiers. I like the way his head works, and I wish I got to see more of how he ruled Ithicana. We saw a good bit of Lara without Aren, but in his POVs there wasn’t enough done without Lara. I wanted to see more of him running through the bridge, doing his Kingly duties, and interacting with his soldiers. Low key though, he’s a little too forgiving. Like be angry! Your wife deceived you, was going to overthrow your country, and is a spy, but hey that’s okay. I love you.

Side characters: I thought Jor was a good mentor for Aren. I would like to see more of him. He seemed to be a good person with looking out for Aren and the country’s best interests. I’ve seen people complain about the “crass” language of the soldiers, but that is what makes their characters feel more realistic. Having been around those types in the real world, that is very much how they would speak. There’s a reason people refer to swearing as “like a sailor.” Ahnna…..I don’t know how to feel about her. She was fine, but also a little flat.

Romance: For being listed as “Romantic Fantasy,” I felt like this book lacked romance. There was definitely fantasy, but when the author said slow burn, she meant that there’s only a scrap of romance. They “love” eachother, but when she is doing her whole reveal about the spy life, why didn’t she reveal her sisters and what she did. She loves this man and has seen how he acts and that he is honest, so why does she believe her father over him when her father effectively abused her for 15 years?

I wish that their romance had more sexual tension and more build up to the scene where they did have sex. In addition, when they sneak back into her home country and Aren sees his old fling, I cringed so hard. This scene bothered me because Aren, for being a good guy, seemed like he was getting ready to have his way with her and would have cheated on Lara had it not been for Jor.

World Building: I have a good grasp on Ithicana, but the rest of the world fell a little flat to me. Even Lara’s homeland was a little flat. I thought using the bridge was a neat idea to move goods, but I really didn’t understand the need for secrecy?

I have book two in my cart to buy, but it won’t be on my next to read any time soon.

See you after the next chapter!
Cayla